Awww this poem has so much emotions and I have gone through that my dear and it just hurts like bother wound great poem filled with imagery and very strong emotions 5/5
Lady Ash

This is amazing. It's filled with such raw emotion and the descriptions you've used here really help to convey the image across through the written words. It's like foolishness, then jealousy, but even if given the opportunity you couldn't love them the way they need. Great job here, I enjoyed reading this!! :)

Thank you both

Ur welcome sweetie! :)