Treasure Hunt

This poem is fantastic. It was so simple, but the style and flow gave it a depth I would not have expected. The word choice was simple yet it painted one of the most elaborate pictures a person has only dreamed of. Your voice was loud and clear here, with the statements of how much you were willing to do for this person's love; that is an excellent skill to have.

I really liked this piece. Nice job.

Thomas, I feel like you keep growing and growing as a poet and I love it! Loved the whole "coal mining" analogy used here , it made me chuckle because I've just never seen this analogy before and it was quite cool. I was really loving the words related to mining and how you used them in this piece, "Dig, Chissle, etc"

I admire the way you write your love pieces.

Awwww, thats cute. I like how you made it look like a tressure hunt quest :) The wording made it so easy to imagine the whole atmosphere of this piece. And great flow as well.

Keep writing ..

Sighs.... Your love poetry is really becoming my favorite pieces to read by you... because you have such a realistic and delicate way of writing your feelings for this person and I admire that. I love the metaphor.... Very pretty piece by you!