Sighs.... Your love poetry is really becoming my favorite pieces to read by you... because you have such a realistic and delicate way of writing your feelings for this person and I admire that. I love the metaphor.... Very pretty piece by you!

Awwww, thats cute. I like how you made it look like a tressure hunt quest :) The wording made it so easy to imagine the whole atmosphere of this piece. And great flow as well.

Keep writing ..

Thomas, I feel like you keep growing and growing as a poet and I love it! Loved the whole "coal mining" analogy used here , it made me chuckle because I've just never seen this analogy before and it was quite cool. I was really loving the words related to mining and how you used them in this piece, "Dig, Chissle, etc"

I admire the way you write your love pieces.

This poem is fantastic. It was so simple, but the style and flow gave it a depth I would not have expected. The word choice was simple yet it painted one of the most elaborate pictures a person has only dreamed of. Your voice was loud and clear here, with the statements of how much you were willing to do for this person's love; that is an excellent skill to have.

I really liked this piece. Nice job.