At work......drooling at my desk ...be back in soon and reserving my spot here OMG!!"! im loving nature pieces today whoooooot!!

Queen of nature never miss up her nature pieces:)
Awesome poem.

Ok so im back lol

Syrup, you know how much i love your writing we have spoken on many occasion about this, i love rhyming schemes, i love nature poems and i love you....

So is it any surprise that this piece just rocked my poetic world? i know people alwys mention word choice and flow but ...in this piece...they we more than perfect, i loved how you spaced out the stanzas because it makes you read it in a certain way which i just love, i cant say enough about this piece and honestly one of my favourite pieces in its genre.....just perfect xx

Ohhh, it is not often I see rhyming in your poetry. This is so good Maple, it is very creative and you made it flow so well throughout even with your very unique word choices. I loved the idea of secrets in nature, what goes on that we are unaware of.

Love this one Maple. xx

You write so so amazingly wonderful. Your perfection in portraying the beauty of nature in your writings are simply soothing and uplifting. You wrote through the lives of these birds, in their own mystic realm. Its just on point, you always nail it beautifully. I loved the 3rd stanza alot. The metaphor is so elegant; 'dancing on .skins, like tiny pins'. I adore your work so greatly. *blushes* :) ..