I loved the flow here.Wonderful piece!

Its just the feeling that strike the heart and time and again make it ache...even we just pretend being happy for not getting what we had craved for.

Sad but true

A forbidden love is what I have... someone who cannot be loved... This poem really touched home for me..thanks for sharing keep it up!

Lovely write. The rhymes flowed really well, and I'm sure a lot of people would be able to relate to this.

Forbidden love...by tradition???
If its the case then...it relates to me...
(pardon if I'm wrong)
Anyway, very sad poem written well!

Really nice..

Keep it up..

5/5