No limits

by Alanis   Sep 15, 2012


No limits,
You ready?
Time to be
Everything
You've always
Wanted to be.
Can you handle
The pressure?
Can you pull
Yourself together?
The time is ticking.
Are u prepared?
Hells flames or
Heavens gates?
Its your choice.
Still licking those
Lips of deceit?
Or are you still
Drinking a cup
Full of lies?
Its time.
1...2...3
Go.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is cute and has a sense of humour at the end part. A piece counsel to make that decision to partake in that life changing act or keep dwelling in your weakness and doubts. A strong message for all it entails. Keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I loved the format and the impact it causes on the reader.

    • 12 years ago

      by Alanis

      Thank you Karla^^

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    The short lines made this poem more impacting. I love the message.

    • 12 years ago

      by Alanis

      Thank you Amy!