Comments : Son of My Right Hand (Senryu)

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Woo hoo, great imagery

    It is amazing how much you can say with so few words.

    Do the feathers being broken relate to a loss of freedom?

    I love all formed poetry, It is great to restrict yourself to a type so that you have to cram powerful words and metaphors in.

    awesome

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Such sad words from you Maple, but you expressed them well as always xx hugs

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Syrup your awesome xx the title iw enough to make me blub today xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Nema

    Whoa. I'm speechless. Your last line.