by BlueJay
I really like this one, good job mom. Sorry the comments sonlate though |
I just wanted to say you are a truly amazing writer especially for such a young age wonderful job! (: |
by Lune de ma vie
Beautiful poem with much description and emotion. |
by CuteThingsGoneWrong
A lot can be said in this poem, and again its very easily to relate to. This one you can tell that it has a deeper meaning to the poet though, which lets you into their soul a little but the way you write it feels like just a toe. Like im testing the waters in a pool lmao. But back to the poem at hand i suppose. |
Intresting poem, for a beginning poet you're starting on the right track by using imagery and emotions two of the most important things any poet can posses in a poem! Although I would've wanted it slilghtly longer on each stanza I find it that it does have it's charm, seems to flow throughout the poem and of course made the reader go "awe good for you!". Like Willow aka CTGW it's relatable world wide and that's what connects each poet together the experiences of yesterday, or of today and finding a cure in a poem in ways that words can only heal. Anyways great job for a beginning poet always send me a private message is you need a poem commented on hope to see your work in the future! 4/5 |