:-( ............. I keep reading these beautiful and heartfelt, yet sad pieces this weekend... Sometimes the sorrow within is so deep that its hard for us to see true love.... sometimes the heart has a way of trying to keep you safe from harm, when in reality its the mind playing tricks on you... just my thoughts~ Beautiful and touching piece Stephen!

It's like I'm reading something emotional from a lyricist. I read it fast, paused a little at some places, then fast again. Stephen, this is stunning IMO. I like how you showcased being unable to feel, while everyone around you pictures you as something big. Cool write.

Forgive us men for being so unaware of love.
We are simply not used to soft touches and deeply meant emotions.

So assault our walls and free us if you can :)

Good write!

Some people hope for things that just aren't there, hun..I hope you are not one of them!

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid