Borealis

by Jenni   Sep 17, 2012


During my return I reminisced
about planting Jasmines or roses
into dreams, blooming together.

Various sallow nightfalls ago
the peaky swollen moon set
in your mouth's easeful waters
amidst dandling stars, but you
just blew wistful Adieus. Musing
about forlorn hopes - I left
with a whiff of You.

The wind leant on my back
while a maiden succumbed to
my corvine eyes. I couldn't help,
but to detonate her hourglass -
pounced on diminished living will.
I mashed up obscurity, sparked it
and dyed the sky with more yang.

After desperately trying to wash
my hands of it, I confessed to
my innocence meeting its maker.
Thitherto the wind gave up its rest
and developed a hurricane, that
embraced me and kept me closest
to heart. Nature did not destroy me,
but was on my side.

Now it is time to go home -
but even though I lost my humanity
(which is the only thing persons have)
by fighting those, that are inhumane,
I will now return to you. Keep in mind,
that periods adumbrate ends, but mine
is yet to come -

so is ours.

*written for Abed's site contest (Hunger Games)

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  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Pretty intense write , it had a real power from it and I just loved the opening

    Sorry it took a while

    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Wow, not much I can say now that my mind is blown :o ...

    What a vivid description and what a story you tell here

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Love love love it!!

    OMG!! jen this is a master piece...i love it all but,

    The wind leant on my back
    while a maiden succumbed
    my corvine eyes. I couldn't help,
    but to detonate her hourglass -
    pounced on diminished living will.
    I mashed up obscurity, sparked it
    and died the sky with more yang.

    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

    @-@!!!!!!

    SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    This may not be your best piece in the contest, but I loved it. It was somehow wordy in very little lines, but such details make the images more precise, so that may not be bad at all. Overall, I really liked the incorporation of Northern Lights :)