Comments : Perfect.

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Whoooooooooot!!!

    Omg! Now that is a love poem :-)))

    Ok, now im a BIG love poetry fan and this is just awesome, i really love your rhyme scheme in this piece but the way you write is fantastic, you use great words placed exactly where you need them and it makes this write flow like a soft river, i just adore this piece :-))

    Look forward to your next write....oh and btw i just love the title and how it wraps up in the poem. :-))

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Double post sorry :-/

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    TRIPLE Post lol! See how excited i got lol x

  • 12 years ago

    by EmilyAnn

    Thankyou oh so much, im glad you enjoyed reading it :)