Coffee Streetwise

Title: Coffey should be "Coffee" and the S on "streetwise" should be capitalized.

First stanza: Coffee definitely does affect your mood, huh? Avid coffee drinkers must have their morning coffee or they are in very grumpy moods, lol. In the last line, should "strees" be "streets"?

Second stanza: Great imagery. I can see a working woman walking down the city streets babbling on her cell, sipping her coffee. Okay, typos: coffey should be coffee again...and invisibel should be 'invisible'

Third stanza: I love the ending...makes you wonder about all the people you pass by on the street. Are they smiling at you? because of you? for you? Thought provoking.

Thanks for the kind words

Interesting piece, I like this poem because I am personally a coffee addict with that being said I find it a bit creative as well. Good poem