by Brittany Klein Sep 18, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
8-17-2012 |
by Burning Angel
Great story! you have a few misspelt words, but i totally blame the keyboard ;) you done a great job keeping my attention! |
by East Poetry
This was a great poem, I loved the story and how it kept me intrigued. Your rhyming skills are strong. there was a lot of heart put into this poem. |
by Amreen
This is so brilliant... yes the piece is too long though, it stills clings to read it till the end as it seems much of a story which you specified in the title:) And I loved the story behind and hope all gets well between you two... I loved the way you tried to rhyme it doing justice to a great extent and I would say that khalid sir said it all about the minor issues, else it is a sweet love story.. |
by Amreen
This is so brilliant... yes the piece is too long though, it stills clings to read it till the end as it seems much of a story which you specified in the title:) And I loved the story behind and hope all gets well between you two... I loved the way you tried to rhyme it doing justice to a great extent and I would say that khalid sir said it all about the minor issues, else it is a sweet love story.. |
Nice story! I do have some points: |