by Fulcrous Sep 18, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
It's always like that; painful. |
by BlueJay
This piece is extremely sweet and very well written, the only thing i can suggest to keep in mind for the future is maybe you shouldn't capitalize the first letter of every single line, it really really detracts the reader from the main piece. |
Previous should be precious sweetie besides that it's a good poem 5/5 |