Comments : Death Wants Life (Backwards Forwards Haiku)

  • 12 years ago

    by SamJones

    Wow, so simple yet very clever and creative, love the way it almost echoes

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      Thank you very much. This is my first attempt with a backwards forwards Haiku.

  • 12 years ago

    by William

    Never read a backwards forwards haiku before.
    This is great though! 5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      I'm glad I could be the first. Thank you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Very clever, I like this.
    It is essentially two poems in one.
    Well done for taking it on.

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      Thank you Darren! I wrote this after being inspired by your backwards forwards Haiku.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    I liked your attempt and the message you give here.. beautiful one LW... Your writes always a pleasure to read...
    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    I liked your attempt and the message you give here.. beautiful one LW... Your writes always a pleasure to read...
    :)

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      Thank you Amreen. Your comments mean a lot.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    We die all day long, to live on. The need for living, is to care.

  • 12 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    This is brilliant! Well written.

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      Thank you Marvelous and Formidable Muse! I always enjoy what others have to say about my work.