Oh my gosh Jake! Im so glad you joined our club or I would have never came across this poem.

You gave me little, but still I loved, knowing love's never too soon

^ Loved this line, I think this is true, yet also scary...sometimes someone can give too much to one person who isnt ready to accept it, which can then lead to sadness, but then again you never know if it can lead to something more blissful unless you try and give your all..

And so love went the way of morning mists, and faded to the winds

^^ HOLY CRAP...that was beauty at its finest...excfellent metaphor I just fell in love with that and thats literally what I pictured, mist blowing into the wind...loved loved loved.

I really just loved the message to this piece, losing love is difficult, its hard, its painful, it pisses people off at times, but sometimes it can be helpful, makes you learn mistakes and learn lessons and it does help set your lifes course....

Lovely write my friend :)

I think Chels said it all, this is an awesome write dude, you have a great control over your vocabulary and its a fantastic write :-)

Great job :-)