Andrea, there is no way in hell I can pick this poem/story a part. I am so so so proud of you for taking my advice and seriously letting yourself go and just digging deep about how your relationship makes you feel..

I know for someone like you, who is just addicted and alive by nature, its hard to do that, you dont open yourself up as much as you should in your poetry, even though you say poetry is your comfort, which Im sure it is, you dont release the way most poets do. Which is like this, and you finally did that!!

Im just so pleased at this write, and to be honest Andrea, I know why you dont write this way. Its because its a touchy subject, for understandable reasons. So to do this....the only thing I can keep saying is Im proud of yourself for taking you there..

I know it felt good to write this. :O)

Love it!!!

Wow wow wooow, this piece have said your story, in a really nice way.
I'll come back, wanna leave a longer comment:)

Not many people find this kind of love, so happy that you did, hang on to it, its a precious treasure...

Beautiful.....in fact probably the most beautiful spit and post ive ever seen xxx

Maple Tree, I think you have been holding this inside, trying to be strong for others and not letting yourself go through these emotions. It shows in here the relief of finally getting some of it out. I am glad of that.

You truly expressed what a unique love you have found and the way love should be, wording here is just beautiful. I hope you continue to write more.

This poem really touched me Maple, I know it must have been hard for you to post. Thank you for sharing a part of you with us.