Comments : Circle

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Things will improve, we do not know what the future holds.

    this poem is very hopleless which is sad to know this is how you feel, I know how desperate this feeling can be and you expressed that well here, keep writing it out.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    You know, why not just stay in between?

    It's easy to say but perhaps, one day you'll find that balance. However, I wanted to say that I like this piece, it made me picture someone with two personalities, one talking to the other and the other talking to the one. There is confusion going on and also frustration.

    And right towards the end the sadness of this piece intensifies, specially, because the idea of not feeling anything at all is being contemplated. But may be the equilibrium can be find. Going to the center of that circle and remain there? Instead of traveling in the circumference of it? 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    I keep seeing those short to the point pieces by you, and they are just fantastic T!

    This one in particular I honestly love. But there is a part that just stuck in my head ..

    "Too tough for love
    Too soft for hate"
    ^^
    I love the contrast in those lines. Love is soft but you are too tough for it, while hate is tough and you are too soft for it. WOW! I just love it!

    Keep up the good work dude ;)