One More Day

You will definatly make it through this, let the birds remind you of that and remind you of how many people will be here for you in support of you.

Your writing is your outlet... keep it going. xx

I agree with what Britt has said. I love the idea of birds as being so inspiring. Their songs are uplifting and yet go unnoticed such as the days that come and go. These little things should not go unnoticed and you penned that perfectly here.

"another day, than so can I...."

than should be then. :)

This is really beautiful and said, but your ending is so very inspirational. Like no matter what happens in the world, the birds start over a new day, on a new page and instantly carry their tunes for the world to hear... and when we wake up the next day, instead of being instantly grateful for another day, we stress, worry and complicate life in general, no matter how good or bad we have it. Each day is a gift and it's so often we forget that.

Wow your poem really made me think lol. I love this!

Hi Andrea
Simply love this poem, so many hidden clues and more

This is a sad piece, I love how you ended it, how you will keep going, if that person did..
Amazing job..