by Hannah Lizette Sep 19, 2012
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Hello lover... |
by Fear2love
Woe. very creative and detailed, felt like I was in th room with you. |
by Midnight Sky
Great job I love dark poems they are raw & real.5/5 |
by xXxMidnight SoulxXx
*shivers slightly* this was downright SCARY to me and i LOVE dark poetry so this AWESOME!!! i can just imagine the girl is sick and stinking tired of the husband's lack of control with his endless drinking and she's fed up and takes her fun i gotta wow you are soo gonna end up in my favorite poems/authors list!!! 5/5 |
Been there and done that ,but you described it so well |
by WW
Wow, this is a powerful poem. It take you from a serene sort of feeling and then drops you into whats really happening. Great job! |