by Naughtymouse
Oh....my......god!!! |
by Amy
Very strong poem. The story is captivating and held me until I have reached the end. |
by Baby Rainbow
Hannah!! this is so good, I love your layout of this and how you had short lines between the stanza's this gave it so much extra ooomph! |
by Chelsey
Hanner Nanner!! Congrats on the win baby girl! This poem is astounding. Seriously love the story in it, love the revenge, the the power that comes from a woman who can't take it anymore.love the darkness, the twist, the detail. Everything about this poem is so fascinating and I feel like you have grown from this write compared to your poems the last few months. |
by Decayed
Hannah, I enjoyed this cold murder plot. It felt creepy, and a little bit sarcastic in the end in the way you tended to kill. "number thirty six" was a beautiful incorporation... It adds some fogginess. Overall, I liked this poem so much. You have some enticing narrative skills in there. |
by Maple Tree
Hannah- Congratulations! this was a massively powerful write!! Well deserved win!! |
by Lioness
Oh hun, I am sorry that I haven't seen this one until now. Wow, so powerful, vivid and emotional. |
Hello lover... |
This is awesome , so dark I loved the idea |
by Reaper
Absolutely Amazing!!!!! Every bit of it Hannah truly very very Good :) 5/5 |
by nouriguess
Congratulations! |
by Hellon
I really love how you started this poem with Hello Lover and ending it with Goodbye Lover....nice word play. |
I think you have an amazing ability to draw in the reader...the ending was a little too morbid for my taste but i think you have some serious talent :) |
by Amreen
This was something really wonderful.... I couldn't leave reading it till the end... I loved the dark imaginary here and the details were so clear and crisp... I am happy that you won cuz this is worth the win!! Beautiful piece... Just love it:) |
by Xanthe
Congratulations :) |
by Roses Bleed
Wonderful wordplay, I literally shivered when I read the last line. Excellent job! |
Wonderfully Done!!! |
I really enjoyed the novel like flow of this poem, darlin! |
by WW
Wow, this is a powerful poem. It take you from a serene sort of feeling and then drops you into whats really happening. Great job! |
Been there and done that ,but you described it so well |