Comments : The Ending

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I hope everyting might be fixed.Take care.Love you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Love the pain, what a great final line,

    there is half an acrostic here as well

    'swim?'

    great emotion and love he darkness.

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      Thank you. I've been writing some Acrostic stuff. I wrote a backwards forwards Haiku, like you!

      What do you me swim?