Comments : Delta

  • 12 years ago

    by LostWords

    I would put my favorite line but the further I read the more I gathered favorites. By the end they were all incredible.

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Karla,

    You are my inspiration on this site,
    how do you do it so effortlessly,

    just love the last stanza,
    all of your poems are a lesson in language.

    another superb one,

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Hey, Karla. Your title brilliantly matches your content. I won't lie and say, I grasp the meaning... But I think you have related the paths of life to one end through a delta... I don't know, but the overall impression this gave me was Fascinating.

    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Reading your poetry, you make me see the world through your eyes; how you see it. And it's beautiful..

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Seriously an incredible one... I always like to read poems which have so much to offer through their words and this one's did it likewise.... :)

  • 12 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Incredible poem Karla!

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This poem was very calming and yet I couldn't help but feel sorrow and frustration. I admired the nature tones within and the visual display of a woman sitting near a pond of koi fish was very soothing. I adore poems with a deep passion intertwined. I also felt like the woman is trying to take on the weight of the world and needing to take a break from the struggles. The creative look of this piece is what hooked me along with the many paths I took while reading this piece... Very nice!!