by Larry Chamberlin Sep 20, 2012
category :
Life, society /
other
Clusters of words don't |
by Tara Kay
Simplicity is the key in certain poems...I find myself searching for too much and loosing the whole essence of what I am trying to write about. |
Love this senryu!!! |
by Decayed
Most of the time, that's true. Choking verses with words and stuffing them with spicy thesaurus vocab can make you pass a lot of gas! It gets irritating to the stomach and eyes and tongue I mean. Instead of enjoying the imagery, one has to force himself to gulp the idea down his throat. |
by Nema
Did you mean me in this poem? Because I feel like this almost all the time. |