Comments : Someone..

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    I love this poem here I like the emotion and passion that is expressed here my favorite stanza...

    Bathing in emotions, need a hand of towel
    that can run through my heart delaying shower.

    Bathing in emotion depicts the thought of being consume or overtaken by your feelings. The expression I need a hand towel brings to mind that you need to be dry from the waters of her love, my heart delaying showers makes me think of a heart that's needs to release it desires.

    Very good...

  • 12 years ago

    by Ravi Thakkar

    Thnk u lady...