Early (Rictameter)

by Maple Tree   Sep 20, 2012


Early
sounds of morning,
tease droopy eyes to wake,
songbirds bless a pastel sunrise
scattering the landscape with beautiful
colors, mixing marigolds and
petunias with a kiss
of hope, I rise
early

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  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Nominated, baby.

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Love this, I am attracted to formed poetry like a fly is to sh...

    er.... Like romeo was to juliet (sorry)

    I love the shape, love the whole form, I will try one of these methinks

    The imagery and descriptive narrative was superb by the way.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    This is refreshing^____^

    I love this piece soo berryyy much

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oh my gosh I really love rictameters but I font think I've read a nature one in a SUPER long time. So, I loved this!..seriously adored the descriptions of the two flowers, I could totally picture them. Just gorgeous :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, Maple this is beautiful. You are just showing off now with your talent, nice relaxing message.... beautiful. xx

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