Sugar Kisses (Doditsu)

by Maple Tree   Sep 20, 2012


Flavor my tongue with riches
of candy coated kisses,
tempting me to feed upon
each word you whisper.

Doditsu-Japanese form consisting of one four lined, non rhyming stanza, syllables going 7-7-7-5.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the choice of words you have used here
    mixing food/sweet and love together which makes it a passionate and romantic read!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Andrea I miss our poem and comments
    this is smoking hot, oh yeah

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Love love love the topic...its almost more "cutesy" than a beautiful pieces..I love "flavor my tongue with riches"...good way to describe french kissing without saying french kissing....

    Mwah! There's a sugar kiss for ya lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This flow was perfect Maple and syllable count was spot on.

    You make it look so easy to do these forms!

    keep writing x x

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