This flow was perfect Maple and syllable count was spot on.

You make it look so easy to do these forms!

keep writing x x

Love love love the topic...its almost more "cutesy" than a beautiful pieces..I love "flavor my tongue with riches"...good way to describe french kissing without saying french kissing....

Mwah! There's a sugar kiss for ya lol

Andrea I miss our poem and comments
this is smoking hot, oh yeah

I like the choice of words you have used here
mixing food/sweet and love together which makes it a passionate and romantic read!