Disappointment (mini mono verse)

by Chelsey   Sep 20, 2012


You sinner!
Hells dinner.
No winner.
Mind spinner.
Foul grinner.

Bad mistakes.
Caused heart breaks,
Stomach aches,
Heads to shake.
You're so fake!

*mini mono verse is 2 stanzas of five lines, 3 syllables each.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Ohhhhh you have done a crazy form too! Now I know where Darren got that form from, lol

    I LOVE IT! I dont think I read it though, I think I sang it, hehe :P

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Amazing tara. You done well. Its good to know such kind of poetry. Thanks for posting.

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Woo hoo

    I have a new form to try.

    love hells dinner,

    so tight, so fast and great rhyming.

    did I say woo hoo?

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Well I guess I have to hold my hands up and say I was wrong I've read it again and it's a lot more powerful than the surface words

    You did well with my challenge :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    So true :)

    Love this little piece of humour and truth...