Comments : Disappointment (mini mono verse)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    So true :)

    Love this little piece of humour and truth...

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Well I guess I have to hold my hands up and say I was wrong I've read it again and it's a lot more powerful than the surface words

    You did well with my challenge :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Woo hoo

    I have a new form to try.

    love hells dinner,

    so tight, so fast and great rhyming.

    did I say woo hoo?

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Amazing tara. You done well. Its good to know such kind of poetry. Thanks for posting.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Ohhhhh you have done a crazy form too! Now I know where Darren got that form from, lol

    I LOVE IT! I dont think I read it though, I think I sang it, hehe :P