Comments : These tears

  • 12 years ago

    by LostWords

    I love the shape of this.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Very gloomy and sad piece... it pours out true, raw emotions that are instilled in you... I could see two ideas brimming up... sometimes optimistic and sometimes a deep pessimist... And I loved the flow, the imagination running throughout...

    Typo: with should be will on 7th last line...
    Overall great FS:)