Comments : Breezy Curtains

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Ohhh...such a beautiful and breezy image this poem has given me...love it! I especially liked this part:

    Curtains flying

    away with

    charcoal shadows,

    and of course the ending closes with a soft touch..enjoyed the read!

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    That was beautifully romantic... well, in a creepy way.
    I love curtains that wave with the wind, this image can make me write long love novels for good.

    Keep writing and versifying such images. So you.
    ; )

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Very clever, shows a great eye for detail, and a power to put that fine detail into words.

    love the shape BTW