Wind

by Dawn   Sep 21, 2012


Beat at a stone cold
core, wistfully swaying to
unforgiving roads.

Never remembered
such biting words spoken in
my dried out tear ducts.

Although it's a new
feeling in my decayed heart,
I feel I'll learn soon.

Give me a moment
to recollect old moments
in my vision, gone.

Left with the dust, no
longer lingering in this
drab asphalt nightmare.

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  • 12 years ago

    by AngelDust

    This is amazing. A really stunning write. It's one of the best poems I've read in a long time. The way you worded this was brilliant and I really don't know what else to say. Fantastic!

    Danika.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Give me a moment

    frankly no, I wont, this some lovely poem, congrat on it

  • 12 years ago

    by Dawn

    Thank you very much Britt :)

    I'll look out for some, I'm inlove with syllable ones at the moment.

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    Dawn you so quickly and beautifully rise to the challenge... You are amazing, this is incredible. Your last stanza? Absolutely wow.

    WHAT its going away! I'm gonna go throuh that site and save all the forms then lol. Thank you for letting us know, I wouldnt have known otherwise.

    Dawn if you go to shadowpoetry.com and then resource and types of poetry. It gives you a huge list of forms to use, some easy, some really challenging. Some are rhyme, syllables or both

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Sorry to intrude, but you should check that site, It seems that after September 31, shadow poetry will be discontinue.

    hmm.. may be it's just the chapbook and the bookstore. Perhaps not the poetry links.

    Edit: My favorite stanza is the last one, left with the dust.

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