I want more! Lol this was really so amazing and inspiring. You should edit this into a chain haiku and satisfy my selfish desires :) hahah. I love how you broke the line for the first line, extending into the second. Crafty :)

Yep, just adding multiples haikus and link them together. That would be awesome if you did it here.. it looks like there are so many ways you could go with this and i think it would be great!

You definitely seem to be enjoying syllables lately, have you checked out shadowpoetry? They have a huge list of forms and examples. It's a helpful site.

Sorry to intrude, but you should check that site, It seems that after September 31, shadow poetry will be discontinue.

hmm.. may be it's just the chapbook and the bookstore. Perhaps not the poetry links.

Edit: My favorite stanza is the last one, left with the dust.

Dawn you so quickly and beautifully rise to the challenge... You are amazing, this is incredible. Your last stanza? Absolutely wow.

WHAT its going away! I'm gonna go throuh that site and save all the forms then lol. Thank you for letting us know, I wouldnt have known otherwise.

Dawn if you go to shadowpoetry.com and then resource and types of poetry. It gives you a huge list of forms to use, some easy, some really challenging. Some are rhyme, syllables or both

Thank you very much Britt :)

I'll look out for some, I'm inlove with syllable ones at the moment.

Give me a moment

frankly no, I wont, this some lovely poem, congrat on it

This is amazing. A really stunning write. It's one of the best poems I've read in a long time. The way you worded this was brilliant and I really don't know what else to say. Fantastic!

Danika.