Life a Remake

by Ray Blue   Sep 21, 2012


Sandstorm and rain
This house of pain
Thunder and lightning
Our world is changing
The smell of betrayal
Cold lips of denial
Drinking the bitter taste
Of fate, all lost and waste
I break
I quake
I made more mistakes
I take
I overtake
And dream of this life some remake.

Submerging in cold sweat
Life's like a Russian roulette
We are indeed so naive
Guts just under your sleeve
Find salvation in hemisphere
Of spiraling atmosphere
Synapse of raw fears
Plasma, blood and tears
I'm awake
I ached
I avoid the same mistakes
I retake
I undertake
And prayed for this life's better remake.

The smell of gunpowder
The smell of greed and power
Alleys, valley of the shadows
Of death and see tomorrow
The unborn destiny of our own
Finding way back home
Many had fallen
But never be forgotten
I partake
I shake
I keep making mistakes
I retake
I undertake
And made this life for remake.

Emerge from darkness
Heal this blindness
Madness, just beat down
Going for another round
Freedom has its price
The one reason is sacrifice
God save us from harm's way
Until we see the light of day
I break
I quake
I learned from these mistakes
I retake
I undertake
And made this life a beautiful remake.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Sorry for the double post!

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Hmmm...we learn from our mistakes and from that try to make our life better so we can live without worry..liked the read :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Another good one. If we learn from our mistakes and don't make the same ones over and over, I suppose life could be considered a remake. Good job.