I wish that this would end sooner or later<3

You think its weird, well I think its creative, awesome piece:)

Maybe her connection was busy, but the connection to your poem has always an open channel.
you are dancing tango with the stanzas, swirling the words. Having fun in a serious way, just loved it

Very clever, I like an odd write.
this may be odd but it is very clever, it shows your ability at looking at something in a different way.

like how you linked SV and mosh pits.

very good

The writes that come from nowhere often lie deep within and what may be odd to you, is often ingenious to others :)

I think Tara nailed it with her comment. This is so funny because I want to follow the story, but I havea bad habit of reading author notes first, so while reading this piece I heard an MRI banging. LOL

Then I read it again, and loved the creativity and what you came up with. Title was perfect! :)