Comments : Beautiful Corpse (Lanturne Chain)

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Wow this is very clever, I am partial to formed poetry as some people may have guessed, but to combine forms!!

    This is great.

    Love the message and the bottle to write about a touchy subject.

    You could argue that a deeper meaning suggests that he just cannot let go of his lover who is now dead, so points towards mental illness as well.

    great poem

    I will be back to nominate on monday

    • 12 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      I actually agree, I was leaning towards the mental illness aspect of it as well... thank you Darren

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Aaaaaaaah AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME, love this piece everything about it=D

  • 12 years ago

    by William

    This is a great piece. The acrostic especially blew me away! Luckily you pointed it out, or I would probably never have seen it.

    Definitely a favorite.