Comments : Lost in crowd

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    My heart and soul remains still like insane,

    Sorrows and pain come in my life like chain.

    My heart aches like its melting in fire,

    Living with emptiness, I am just tire..

    My fav. Stanza..i like ur poems..nvr stop sharin them with me.

    • 12 years ago

      by Suyechha

      Thanku ...:)..I will try to write more....

  • 12 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Well done dear!!
    This is my favourite from you so far..the poem reflects ur intense desire and i loved the way u presented.
    Keep up the high spirit!
    Keep writing girl..
    ^_^

    • 12 years ago

      by Suyechha

      Intense desire not really..bt somelike..n u r always around me to encourage ...:) thank u dear prati..

  • 12 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Well done dear!!
    This is my favourite from you so far..the poem reflects ur intense desire and i loved the way u presented.
    Keep up the high spirit!
    Keep writing girl..
    ^_^