Comments : Haunting

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    HOLY CRAP!!!! @_@!!!!!

    My two most favourite poetesses....writing together.......something deliciously dark.....omfg.......for me......this is like poetry porn lol!!!

    AWESOME WRITE!!!!!

    • 12 years ago

      by Chelsey

      ^^^ AHAHAHHAHAH you just took the seriousness out of this whole piece by calling it poetry porn LMAO omg Ben I love you!

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I am honored dear Chels to be a part of this poem with you... thank you!

  • 12 years ago

    by AngelDust

    I'm so sorry for all of the pain that you've been feeling of late. You wrote this very well though. It's harsh and stricking. You used vivid thoughts and strong emotion in this piece. A heart breaking but very good read.

    Danika.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Poetry porn....giggles....

    thank you Ben <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Lol im sorry but.......two girls one poem lmao!!!

    Bad benji i know i know xxx

    But seriously a wonderful write you two xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Double post :-/ see how excited i get?

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    You...my dear are spitting poems like crazy

  • 12 years ago

    by Lost Soul

    Wonderful, very dark and ominous tone. Great read thank you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow you two. What can I say except just wow?

    The flow of this was amazing since it was a collab and it blended as if it only had one author - that is talent! Also loved the darkness of it and the way you drew me in with your words.

    Love it xx