Wow... another nice poem

After reading the other one, I liked it but this one I love... it flows a lot smoother and has a lot more details!

First stanza: Butterflies, nerves...eeek. lol Oh, and stressing over what to wear. Seriously, a first date can give a girl a heart attack! Hahaha.

Second: Very cute and nice rhyme! When you first see him for the first time, it's hard to wipe the smile off your face!

Third: The nerves of not knowing what to talk about first, wondering what he thinks of you, etc is getting to the best of you... you start to tense up and are afraid he will not like you.

Fourth: I love that you incorporated that he helped calm you down... that just by reaching out his hand to hold yours... so adorable and just makes my heart melt lol.

Fifth: You start feeling more comfortable as the night wears on. You open up with him as does he with you. It's so nice to talk to someone for the first time, learning new things about them and just getting to know who they truly are. I always like seeing how different people are from myself and also how much alike they are.

Sixth: A kiss goodnight is always the sweetest thing. It shows that you two truly connected and will hopefully have plenty more in the future! :D

Beautiful write, great job!

This is such a sweet poem, it shows clearly all your nerves you get when you go on the first date, or a lot of other dates for that matter.

I like how you wrote about him offering words of comfort - this made me think of what would comfort me if I heard it when I felt anxious, what would I really want to hear.

Nice work, lovely story xx

This was so sweet...the kind of poem everyone can picture in their minds, and the kind of first date every girl dreams of lol :) good job!