Loved, loved, loved this....I enjoy that you took "point of no return" which is an expression we all know, and you have focused your whole poem around it! Creating this scene of a sailor, bidding farewell to a life she can't handle any longer.

This poem does nothing but make me want to give you advice. Set sail for a new horizon. Go conquer dreams that you didn't think were possible. Leave anyone who taunted you behind..

This is such a great write meme. I really love what you have done here!

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Sighs..... this reminds me of the song "Come sail away" by Styx.. its a beautiful song but it doesn't compare to the beauty of this piece...

When a person is burdened of sorrow, it does make you want to sail away... beautiful piece Meme

I think I interpreted it in many ways... It's beautiful.

It can be related to suicidal since you are saying you are leaving this world. But maybe with departure here, you mean through thoughts. You want to have some comfort, but due to pain you cannot erase your memories.

Wonderful piece!!

Awesome work i actually could get a visual of you leaving some1 and walking up on a small boat all alone and sailing away