Wow, was the only word that can to mind when I read this. Is filled with such emotion. Truly Amazing

I'm speechless at the moment... your word display just made me faint.... beautiful poem!

Amazing, great description and choice of words

Leaving behind a treasure map of insecurities,

scars sure to be revealed again.

- This first part I just read again and again because it really sinks in with me and I am so glad you wored this expression in such a powerful way!

The whole poem was very powerful and your pain is felt with every line.

Evry single line is amazing..

Really great descriptions here. I so enjoyed the rawness of your language.

Something I noticed:

Once tender, now violent, leave my heart,
exit it's remains with pride.
Don't be humble, bathe in it's shattered
pieces.
Paint yourself with it's agony.
^
The three it's here don't need apostrophes.