I want her with me

by Tiller   Jun 29, 2004


I want her with me
by my side
under the stars at night
under the rooftops of a house
no matter where i go
i want her by my side
in the snow
in my mind
all i want
is well.....
i want her with me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was short but very beautiful.. I think it comes straight from your heart, well done. I have some suggestions though xD try to capitalize al the I's

    Nonetheless another fine written piece by you!

  • 18 years ago

    by Flower Child[hippie]

    Awwww how cute i like this one alot

  • 20 years ago

    by LiL One

    awww this is cute, Ilike how you write, its simple and simple is always good, good job...LiL One

  • 20 years ago

    by heather

    awesum job luv heather

  • 20 years ago

    by Amy

    cute, really sweet.

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