This is so filled with emotion..that feeling of battling against yourself and the struggles that we go through..
I hope you can get over this and start anew..never lose hope and have faith..don't torture yourself too much, okay?

Wow this poem blew me away by the powerful emotions seeping out of every line. I feel the anger seeking to be released as it feels so prisoned inside your mind. I feel the sadness cursing through, needing a hopeful light to carry you through.

You have gripped me by the metaphors embedded in this piece such as the tears of pain that are released.

This poem was such a great read, hope you never have to face times like this again
5.5 from me

Blew me away! What a great write and powerful job, the emotions in this piece are real and very expressive. I was easily able to feel what you have spelled out here. The one part which really got me was.
"Craddles the pain of desolation which makes me billow over and weep as if I am a weeping willow swaying in the turbulent winds of a tempest..."
That says it all, I'm sure we have all felt that way, felt like there is no hope and the light will never return. It's such a dark and sad feeling, you really captured it in such amazement and heartache.
Stay strong, keep your head up. Thanks for commenting on mine.
5/5

I was searching for s'th more than just 5... :)

Your really quite good Kirsty :) Tickles chin o- x