I love the use of descriptive language that you have used to allow the reader to feel the emotions you went through and to visually see the emotions pouring and being left shattered on the floor. I find this poem very powerful in its underlying message and you captured the emotions and metaphors so well! |
Thanks SOOO much it means alot! |
by Marvellous
He who brings you pain, helps you learn. A friend, restores hope not sorrow. |
Hey,its a very nice poem...i loved ur opening... |
Thanks :D glad you liked it!! |
by Nick C
Fantastic !!!!! :) Loved that one Kirsty .... Really good :) <---- Claps like nutty seal "Ouut, ouut, ouut" Lolllll Was brilliant that :) |
Hahaha thanks---Throws a fish to you LOL :D |