Comments : Our hero

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Tony: This poem was heart gripping..... and very touching the entire way through.... beautiful!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This poem is so sad. It happens every day to wives and mother and fathers who receive news that their loved one has been killed. :/

    Congrats on being runner up, I like what you did with the topic of "box of letters". :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Unknown

    I always love reading military pieces, I myself am fond of writing them. This one just grips me so hard... just seeing her read each single letter to remind her of the memories and then the last one... one from a fellow soldier, the one he saved his life saying he will forever be in debt to him.

    Very touching... great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I did love this poem so much, Your ending verse alone just holds a lot of power because you can see her clinging onto what she has left of him. Of the memories. This becomes her comfort and her only way to be with him again.

    This is such a sad topic to chose as well which I like reading about because it is something going on a lot right now and I think if the soldiers could read some of these poems about them they would appreciate the thought.

    The little story was very touching and your poetic talent made it a great read.

    Well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Roses Bleed

    Wow. O.O This is really great. I really hope you continue writing poetry because you have a very great way of expressing emotions with words. Hope all of your other one's are like this!

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    If this was runner-up the winner must have been spectacular. Another story beautifully told, Tony, with sensitivity and creativeness. Excellent