I actually really like this...honestly I do!...I didn't know anyone actually owned records apart from me but...it's a good idea! I still have heaps of records but nothing now to play them on haha!!!

Anyway...back to the poem...you have a few little typos here but...I know english is not your first language so....look it over again...if you need some help pm me ok?

I just loved the fact that...records sometimes stuck and you played well with that fact and...of course, every one had a B side which...generally wasn't the best but....you swung that around too....I really liked it!

Thank you for the compliment. This is the first poem i wrote. I was very depressed when i wrote this. Can you please tell me what few little typos were you referring to? I'm open for comments and suggestions for my own betterment.
Thanks a lot!

It wasn't anything major....just your opening stanza that I would like to talk about...

Mirrored memories
and self-created fantasies
stuck on replay
shuffle my thoughts
record the regrets
and loop the pain

I've just deleted the 's's....for your consideration. Normally I don't like all the I's you have here but....I think it works here....so...I wouldn't change them in this case.

I see in a comment that you said this was the first poem you wrote. It's honestly an amazing start! I like the way it was set up.

5/5 definitely

This is creative and cute.lol. but your poem is great and amazing.
Pls keep writing(: