by Sunshine Sep 24, 2012
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
You can keep trying on and on, |
by Ingrid
It became a poem anyway, lol. |
by Tara Kay
Sometimes as poets we just want to write without restriction and I think this piece shows that you had alot of feelings that were pleading to come out of you, which is why you wrote with such conviction and depth. |
by Boy
Amazing. love when you say about black pages. great imagination in fact very straight clear. good work |
by Meme
It reads as a poem to me too! Although I could honestly imagine you yelling this one as a recitle, but what the heck still love it and love the message it deliveres. |
by Maple Tree
This reads like a poem to me.... So I love your title.... and the message clearly states the emotions you harbor within... We just got to write the intensity of our feelings... and I can feel the frustration ...and I really admire this piece... |