Set Fire to the Rain (glosa versa)

by Larry Chamberlin   Sep 24, 2012


Set Fire to the Rain

Cabeza:
But I set fire to the rain,
watched it pour as I touched your face.
Well it burned as I cried
cause I heard it screaming out your name, your name!
- Chorus, "Set Fire to the Rain," by Adele (2012)

Stifling myself was no easy task;
you said that's not what you ask,
yet while living behind this mask
I watched you drink from anger's cask.
Pressed in your silk and lace
your love drowned me in pain
I tiptoed through your torturous race
yet had to maintain a resolute pace
saw your unsweet love still wane
but I set fire to the rain.

You said your love would never fade
For me all sacrifices made
that's a debt I've never paid
still at my door it's laid.
You rolled your eyes and sighed
No remorse, even a trace
just gamesmanship true and tried
real concern has simply died
that tear is false you have no case
watched it pour as I touched your face.

Here we stayed as in the past
and though I stood aghast
you found me firm and fast
spite love that did not last.
Thunder peeled your name
lightning bolts I defied
even so the storm came
soaked my screams just the same
St Elmo's fire is a deathly ride
well it burned as I cried.

Now you have a separate fate
and may soon find another mate
but you are one I'll never hate
find it's just a love too late.
Seek your shelter from the rain
you've cast me out, made me lame
held me up as one insane
it's no victory to be so vain
my thunderbolt is not to blame
cause I heard it screaming out your name,
your name.

[LTFR Club Contest]
NOTE
The Glosa form has two parts: the cabeza (four lines from a well-known poem) and the gloss (four ten-line stanzas, the last line of each being the consecutive lines from the cabeza). The gloss explains, interprets or expands on the cabeza. Lines six and nine of each stanza must rhyme with the borrowed tenth line. The poet decides line length, meter and other rhymes.
[See http://www.poetry-nut.com/glosa_poetry.htm]

Here the rhyme scheme is:
a, a, a, a, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 1 (the glossing line).
d, d, d, d, 3, 2, 3, 3, 2, 2
f, f, f, f, 4, 3, 4, 4, 3, 3
h, h, h, h, 1, 4, 1, 1, 4, 4.

*Note on Copyright & Glosa Verse: The cabeza falls under the Fair Use Doctrine, while the poem as a whole is a Derivative Work of the original, thereby exempt under two exceptions to copyright law.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    This is simply faultless I love the rhyming scheme as well as the usage of Adele's song as the theme. Simply beautiful

  • WOW! << No exaggeration.

    I'm left completely speechless and in utter awe of this piece.

    I will agree with Tara, forms can often leave a writer restricted and the poem often reads that way too - but my god, this did not seem restricted at all.

    RHYME - flawless in sound and syllable count alike.

    FLOW - from beginning to end, it was faultless.

    EMOTION - perhaps you drew on emotion from the song, for the piece, I don't know, but the emotional expression was strong throughout.

    WORD CHOICE/ARRANGEMENT - to my mind, there was not another set of words that could have been more fitting for the piece, nor words arranged more suitably for the content.

    Hats off to you good sir. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    I'm at a loss trying to find the words to praise this piece.

    I just...

    cannot.

    Amazing.

    Not a great review, I know, but I am blown away by this.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Forms are such that you are restricted in how you set out a piece but I can see that your talent is in form writing, you always manage to stop my heart with your writes,

    You took a song that as so much emotion and depth and then wrote a poem that literally complemented that, I could really loose myself within your lines...such beauty and power in what is such a difficult form to pull off.

    I don't get why I am always so surprised with your talent, I know it's there, I just get lost in the whole write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Just... WOW.
    I'm sorry for this pish posh comment. But I just love Adele. I wish I could meet her someday. This brought a new soul to the song. Double applause for restricting it in a form. You made an awesome job!

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