Awesome one..... full heart touched version...i love it

Omg, some tough words, dear but this is beautiful.

Dang girlie. I read that loud and clear. I love it. I love the way it flowed and the emotion. 5/5 <3 :D

Not caring how but one way or another i would tear
you our of my heart,
I'm sure u meant 'out' where u wrote 'our'...
The piece is really great. I can relate to this.
Being in love alone is horrible.
Everything som1 did is unappreciated and is just like I wish I didn't love u when you really do..
Very nice poem...

Nicely written poem my friend, and Im sure ppl here would agree with what Ive said. Keep it up.

Love, we never can get away it, if aren't trapped then we get the other trapped or 50-50.

This is my thought on this delicate but yet broad and complex four letter word. Its rather unfortunate to be used as a motive to satisfy a selfish interest. We always don't get lucky in the choice of a partner. We open our heart, mind, body and soul to a someone whom we wish to spend our lives with. How much we give depends, on the level of mutual and instinctive bond we share.

Unforseen, our decisions will be our downfall someday. We still hope it turns for the better at times, hopefully giving benefit of doubts. The truth always prevails; come rain, come sunshine. No relatioship/marriage can survive a facade. When such is realised, its imperative to be presumptuous in your actions. Thus, moving on. A very lovely piece I must add. *claps*. :-) ..

This is a poem written from the Heart with loads of heartwrenching feeling.
I loved the sheer emotion in this piece.
A great write!

It feels as though this poem was a bit raw and written straight from the heart in a sense, which is what I enjoyed. A very good read for me. Emotions were clear and straightforward 5/5

Wow, I love this poem, because it expresses exact moments I've gone through before.

The opening stanza is so strong. Awesome piece!

Great piece!! Heart taking and interesting. I really loved it.

This poem was good, there are deff some things you can change around, I think all writing can be edited better and better. The piece you wrote was great! There were two stanzas I would probably encourage you to maybe try and change a bit. Your rhyming is great, but if you are rhyming keep the rhythm coming :)

"Never dreaming that what had started as a beautiful thing would turn into a horrible nightmare"

In that stanza I know what you are trying to tell the reader, for me it did not rhyme with that whole stanza before.

It is a beautiful poem indeed, I just do think you can always go back one day and change it although like i said very great piece.

I did enjoy the feelings you put into this piece, keep writing :)